Hi Team!
Here is this week's topic of discussion. We would love to hear your opinion about this statement - Barefoot is better than Shoes.
Remember persuasive writing is all about convincing the reader that your opinion on a topic is correct. Make sure you give at least one reason for your answer.
What do you think? Leave a comment below.
Hi, my name is Myra.
ReplyDeleteI think wearing shoes is better than barefoot.
One reason wearing shoes is better is because if u walk past glass it won't hurt your feet.Another reason wearing shoes is better is because when you have barefoot you can hurt your feet on the ground and when it's hot your feet won't burn
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Summer.
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than barefoot.
One reason Shoes is better is because they can help you from hurting your foot when stepping on prickles or rocks.
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, i'm Kyana. I think shoes are better than bare feet. One reason is it is quite dangerous because you could get glass or something sharp in your foot.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Kyra i think that shoes is better than bare feet because you wont get a stubbed toe. And it's more comfortable in shoes. 😄
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Kalindi and I think that shoes are better then bare feet because there are plenty of different styles.It protects your feet from stepping on something yuck or dangerous it also sometimes increases your speed,there are different types of shoes for example there are,sneakers,jandals,slippers and more. So yeah those are my reasons that shoes are better then bare feet.
ReplyDeleteI think Shoes are better than Bare-feet because if there's glass or prickles on the ground the Shoes can protect your feet, Another reason is if its cold or wet and you have to walk across grass the grass will get all over your feet if you have shoes on you can wait till they dry then air them out and the grass will come off easily
ReplyDelete
ReplyDeleteHi. My name is Caius. I think shoes are better than bare feet. One reason is if you were wearing bear feet you could get prickles. A second reason is that if you wear shoes then if you stand on rocks you feet wouldn't get sore.
Hi, my name is Milla
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than barefoot.
One reason shoes are better is because they are comfortable.
Another reason shoes are better is because they are pretty.
hi my name is tevita
ReplyDeletei think shoes is better than barefoot.
one reason shoes is better than barefoot you can run with shoes.
and you play tag with shoes and you kick with shoes and if you run with barefoot on a hot day your feet might get hot and another reason why shoes is better barefoot because if you run a cold day your feet might get cold and why i think shoes are better than barefoot.
Hi, my name is Brad
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than barefoot.
One reason shoes are better is because they are comfortable.
Another reason shoes are better is because they are pretty.
Hi my name is Zara i think that bare feet is better than shoes.One reason is if you get rocks in your shoes it feels weird.Another reason is if your at the beach you won't get sand in your shoes.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Zeke.
ReplyDeleteI think barerfoot is better than shoes.
One reason barefoot is better is because you dont have to bother to put shoes on \ that are hard to put on.
Hi, my name is cindy.
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than barefoot.
One reason shoes is better is because shoes are pretty.
Hi my name is Tiana
ReplyDeleteI think that shoes are better than barefoot
one reason is because if the round is hot and you are barefoot will get hot and it will make you feet hurt
Hi my name is Kylah i think shoes is better than bar feet
ReplyDeleteOne reason it is quite dangerous to be in bar because you can get cut by glass by anyway
and one more reason why you gotta ware shoes you can make your skin come of in every other way
Hi my name is manase
ReplyDeletei think shoes is better than barefoot
One reason is you can protect your feet from glass
ReplyDeleteHi my name is aku
i think shoes is better than barefoot
One reason is you can protect your feet from glass
Hi, my name is Hunter.
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than barefoot.
One reason shoes is better is because it protects you from glass if you step on glass you will get a cut on your foot
Hi, my name is sophie .
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than bear feet .
One reason because you can get glass in your feet.
Hi my name is Tiare
ReplyDeleteI say Shoes are better
than barefoot why?
because your feet get dirty
and it is more stylesh and
cause your feet can get hurt sometimes on hard rock
and you also can cut your foot on stuff.
Hi, my name is aromahana.
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than bear feet because you can go out side.
Hi my name is Manoa and I think shoes are better than wearing bearfeet because the shoes can protect you feet from sharp objects like broken glass and sharp rocks.
ReplyDeletehi my name is Kejon and i think shoes are better than bear bc you can get
ReplyDeletecut and all that so you know we're shoes
Hi, my name is Azanna.
ReplyDeleteI think Shoes is better than Barefoot.
One reason Shoes is better is because Shoes can be your force field in case you get cut or stand on rocks
Hi, my name is chazei.
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than no shoes.
One reason that you don't get stung by bees.
Hi, my name is joel
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than no shoes.
One reason that you don't get stung by bees.
hi,I'm souta I think shoes is better than no shoes one reson is that
ReplyDeleteif there is glass and if your barefoot you mite get glass in your foot.
hi,I'm peter I think shoes is better than no shoes one reason is that
ReplyDeleteif there is glass and if your barefoot you mite get glass in your foot
hi,I'm otukolo I think shoes is better than no shoes one reson is that
ReplyDeleteif there is glass and if your barefoot you mite get glass in your foot.
Hi, my name is farhan.
ReplyDeleteI think shoes are better than no shes.
One reason is better is because they protect your feet
Another reason is better is because they look cool
Kia ora, My name is Maia and I think shoes are better than bare feet because they protect your feet from stepping on glass or prickles.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Te arohanui.
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than bear feet.
One reason shoes is better is because they are confy.
Another reason shoes is better then bear feet is because
Hi, my name is Alex.
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than no shoes.
One reason if there is glass on the ground it doesn't go frow your feet.
Another reason sHoes are they conFey
Hi, my name is Leaasi.
ReplyDeleteI think Barefoot is better than Shoes.
One reason Barefoot is better is because you don't bister
Another reason Barefoot is better is because you get more sped.
Hi my name is Dakota
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than no shoes
one reason if there is glass on the ground it doesn,t go frow your feet
Another reason shoes are they conFey
Hi, my name is joel
ReplyDeleteI think shoes is better than barefoot.
One reason shoes are better is because they are comfortable.
Another reason shoes are better is because they are pretty.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is aku
I think shoes is better than barefoot.
One reason shoes are better is because they are comfortable.
Another reason shoes are better is because they are pretty
bear feet because you can run faster
ReplyDeletebear feet is better because you run fast
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is joel
ReplyDeleteI think Barefoot is better than Shoes.
One reason Barefoot is better is because you don't bister
Another reason Barefoot is better is because you get more speed