This term we are learning about persuasive writing. Persuasive writing is all about convincing the reader that your opinion on a topic is correct.
We would love to hear your opinion about this statement - Sushi is better than pies.
What do you think? Leave a comment below. Remember to give at least one reason for your answer.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Caius, To be honest, i think pies are much better. they taste nice and don't judge me because i hate the taste of sushi. pies are also better because you can get way more kinds of them. and they have pastry on it. This is my persuasive writing. hope you agree with me.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Caius. My name is Herman. I sometimes teach in your classroom. I agree with you that there are lots of good things about pies and I believe that Sushi... is actually better! Did you know that there are more types of Sushi than grains of sand at the beach? You can even have raw fish ones! That sounds exciting. Have you heard of any weird types of pies?
DeleteKia ora Caius my name is Connor and I think that pies are better too because they warm me up. Why do you not like sushi
DeleteHi, my name is Kyana.
ReplyDeleteI think Pie's are better than Sushi.
One reason Pie's are better is because there is more of a variety, you can have a savoury pie or a sweet pie.
Another reason Pie's are better is because its a kiwi classic.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is _Brad____.
I think ___pies_ is/are better than _sushi___.
One reason _hot___ are better is because...
Another reason ____ are better is because...
In my opinion I think pies are better by a bit better because pies are really very warm and sushi is cold and the pastry is tasty
ReplyDeleteHi Tiana, My name is Nevaeh there's only one thing i dissagree with.
Deleteonly pies have pastry not sushi, but i totally agree that pies are warm but i like sushi better what's your favorite pie.
Hi, Tiana. I am Porshia and I agree with you but sushi is cold because it is made out of different types of seafood in them but pie are warm because they are cooked. In my opinion I think pies are better than sushi. What is your favorite type of pie?
DeleteHi, my name is paige.
ReplyDeleteI think pies are better than Sushi.
One reason is because the pasterey are better is because its yam
Another reason is because the meat are better is because its yam
Hi my name is Finn and I disagree I that sushi is better than pies because they are healthier for you and they taste amazing
DeleteHi Paige. I am Kayleigh G from Mangapapa School. I disagree with you that pies are better than sushi because sushi can come in more flavours than you could ever think of. Sushi is also really healthy and is a delicacy in Japan. Sushi has less calories and tastes really good. Pies have more calories which makes you put on more weight than sushi does. Have you ever had sushi before Paige?🌺🌹
DeleteHi my name is Tanche'and i agree with you pies are so much better than sushi because not all sushi taste good except my mums sushi
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Hi im Zeke, In my opinion I think pies are better by a bit better because pies are warm food and I dont really like cold food and theres way more types to choose from pies.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Myra. I think pies are better than sushi.
ReplyDeleteOne reason pies are better is because there all all different kinds of flavours. Another reason pies are better is because they have better taste than sushi but sushi is kinda of yum but not better than pies.
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DeleteHello Myra my name is Georgia and I go to Mangapapa school.I really agree with you!I think pies are also better than sushi because Pies are hot and tasty.Out of all the pie flavours witch is your favorite flavour? mine is mince and cheese.
DeleteHi, my name is Tearohanui.
ReplyDeleteI think pie is/are better than _sushi.
One reason that i love pie are. better is because it is yum like apple pie
Another reason i hate that sushi it is to dry for me. are better is because they got no white rice.
Hi, my name is Kejon
ReplyDeleteI think sushi is/are better than pies
One reason that is sushiare better is because they have lots of taste
Another reason why they are better is because they have seaweed and i like it
hi my name is Brooklyn and I so agree with you that Sushi is better than pie because it is more taste and yumiya and that is way I agree with you .
DeleteHi Brooklyn It's me Georgia and I disagree with you.As you know I eat pies mostly everyday but I was wondering why you like Sushi better than pies? also if you like pies too but not as much as Sushi.What flavoured pie do you like?
Deletehi Georgia its me Brooklyn and do not say that you disagree because I disagree with youuu !!!!
DeleteWooow Brooky woow but are you going to say what favoured pie you like?
DeleteHi my name is Maia, I think that they are both equal and taste just as good. One reason why is because they both have a flavour that we don't like. This is my persuasive writing and I hope you agree with me.
ReplyDeletehi my name is also maia. I agree that they are both is equal because
Deletepies are bigger and sushi is yum
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is JOEL
I think pie is/are better than sushi
because it got a lot of flavour
Hi my name is Kyra i think sushi is better than pie because i think its nice to try a different foods from different culture another reason is because sushi is has different kinds of food in it.
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is peter i think sushi is better than pie because i think its nice to try a different foods from different culture another reason is because sushi is has different kinds of food in it
ReplyDeleteHello, my name is Manoa.
ReplyDeleteI think pie is/are better than sushi.
One reason some pies contain veges.
Another reason that pies are better than sushi is because its very cheap and its very yummy.
Hi, my name is Dakota____.
ReplyDeleteI think I think pies are better because they tast of the pie ____ is/are better than _I think pie and sushi__._.
One reason it is yum____ are better is because...
Another reason ____ are better is because...
Hi, my name is Hunter.
ReplyDeleteI think pies is are better than sushi.
One reason pies are better is because seaweed taste weird
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DeleteHI my name is Exodus and I go to Mangapapa school and my personal opinion about sushi vs pies is pies because you get mince instead of rice
DeleteHi Hunter my name is Lily and I disagree with you because there are so many different flavors and some don't have much seaweed so you can't really taste it.
Deletehi Exodus my name is Kasey-rae and I disagree because I don't like pies very much please don't be offended by my comment
DeleteI agree with you kasey-Rae pies are not yucky i am sorry i'm just kidding i like pies.
Deletei no Huntet and this is manaijah frome mangapapa school .nz and why do you like pies
DeleteHi, my name is Milla
ReplyDeleteI think sushi is better than pies
One reason sushi is better is because it is nice and soft.
Another reason sushi is better is because it has a nice flavour.
Kia ora Milla. My name is Milah and I go to mangapapa school. I agree with you that sushi is way better than a pie because its better tasting and its SO yummy with soy sauce, what do you think. what is your favorite flavour sushi?
DeleteHi Milla,my name is Tala.
DeleteI like pie and soshe but pie more.
Did you now that there are more flavour for pies.
I now that there are more flavours for soshe but sorry I the like pie more than Siri
Hi, my name is _kingston____.
ReplyDeleteI think __sushi__ is/are better than __pies__.
One reason __hot__ are better is because...
Another reason __tasty__ are better is because...
Hi my name is Zara,i think that sushi is better than pie because you can choose many different flavors.And there is more ingredients.
ReplyDeletehi Zara my is manaijah i like sushi because they are better but i am so sorry but i like pies.
DeleteHi my name is mia. I like sushi better then pie because it has seaweed and I lOVE seaweed.i like samen to.
Deletehay manaijah its me brooklyn and you aposto say that my name is manaijah not my is manaijah ok
DeleteWhy Brooklyn why i don't ker i like pies anb from manaijah.
DeleteManaijah you know that you just rote anb not and? also work on your spelling you potato.
DeleteHola my name is Tiare
ReplyDeletei say sushi is way better than pies to be honest
here is a reason they taste way better than pies
and cause they are a different types of flavours of sushis
and its silky and soft.
Hi, my name is Lea'asi.
ReplyDeleteI think pies are better than sushi.
One reason that pies are better is because it is cheaper
Another reason why pies are better is because it is in every shop
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is aku
I think sushi is/are better than pie
One reason sushi are better is because i like the
Another reason sushi are better is because it is so yum
Hi, my name is Miracle.
ReplyDeleteI think Pies are better than sushi.
One reason Pies are better is because you could choose from a sweet pie or you could choose savoury
Another reason Pies are better is because there are many different types of flavored pies you can choose from.
Hi, my name is Cindy.
ReplyDeleteI think sushi is/are better than pie.
One reason sushi are better is because they are yummy then pie.
Another reason sushi are better is because is quick to make.
Hi, my name is sophie.
ReplyDeleteI think pies are better than sushi
One reason is because pies are yumer then sushi
Another reason is because there is lots of different kinds of pies
Hi Sophie! my name is Georgia and I also think pies are better than sushi.Pies are warm and they aren't cold also what flavoured pie do you like??
DeleteHi, my name is chazei.
ReplyDeleteI think pie is/are better than sushi.
One reason there are different kinds.pies are better is because you can put lots of stuff in pies
Another reason sushi is small and you mite get way to hungry.
Hi, my name is Kylah
ReplyDeleteI think sushi is better than pies
One reason sushi is better is because it has a nice flavour
Another reason why sushi is better than pies because it has some nice soft pieces of rice inside
Hi, my name is Shakaya.
ReplyDeleteI think pie is/are better than sushi.
One reason pies are better is because two pies or one can fill you up.
Another reason pies are better is because its so delicious and its good for dinner and lunch.
Hi, my name is Summer.
ReplyDeleteI think pie is/are better than sushi.
One reason pies are better is because there is so many different varieties of flavours like bacon and egg and mince or mince and cheese
Another reason pies are better is because they are super tasty the will fill me up real good
Hi summer my name is Manaijah and I think pies are good but you need to try something new like sushi.
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ReplyDeleteHi, my name is _Brad____.
I think ___pies_ is/are better than _sushi___.
One reason _hot___ are better is because...
Another reason ____ are better is because.
Hi, my name is Hunter.
ReplyDeleteI think pies is are better than sushi.
One reason pies are better is because they are hot and yummy
hi my name is aromahana i think sushi. is more better than pies one reason is sushi is really yum
ReplyDeletehi aromahana, my name is Reese i agree with you that sushi is better than pies because yes they taste really good and also because they are healthy some of them even have raw fish in them! and some even have sea weed in them.
DeleteI agree and my name is manaijah i like pies because sushi is like raw fish but i like pies because the flavoured i like is bacon and egg pie.
DeleteHello there, my name is Manoa and.
ReplyDeleteI think pies are better than sushi.
One reason is that pies are better is because pies can have vegtabels and lots os stuff
Another reason pies are better is because they are cheap to buy and there yum even if its cheap its great for the morning.
Hello my name is kanye l think that your right because pies taste better.
DeleteHi manoa my name is manaijah and I like pies because they have so much flavours.
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ReplyDeleteHi, my name is sophie.
I think pies are better than sushi
One reason is because pies are warm.
Another reason is because it is cheeses.
Hi, my name is Milla
ReplyDeleteI think sushi is better than pies
One reason sushi is better is because it has seaweed.
Another reason sushi is better is because is delicious.
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DeleteHi Milla Im olive I agree that sushi is better then pies because sushi is delicious and I like the rice and seaweed.
Deletehi my name is Abigail I'm sorry dat I deleted the first one by accident.but I agree with you dat sushi or better than pie but sometimes I love pies and sometimes I love sushi.
DeleteHi my name is Kylah
ReplyDeletei think sushi is better than pies
One reason i really like the seaweed.
Another reason why sushi is better than pies is because and it is really great to eat sometime
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is _Brad____.
I think ___pies_ is/are better than _sushi___.
One reason _hot___ are better is because...
Another reason ____ are better is because
hi my name is sophie i think pies is better than susui.
ReplyDeleteone reason is because pies are hot and i like hot pies
and another reason is because pies are yummy
Hi, my name is Milla
ReplyDeleteI think sushi is better than pies
One reason sushi is better is because it has rice.
Another reason sushi is better is because I like the soy sauce.
Hi my name is kylah
ReplyDeletei think sushi better than pies because
One reason why sushi better than because i like all the ingredients in it
Another reason why sushi is better than pies because its good and yummy
Hi, my name is hunter.
ReplyDeleteI think sushi is are better than pies.
One reason sushi are better is because sushi has healthy stuff in it
Hi, my name is MizzD
ReplyDeleteI think sushi is better than pies
One reason why sushi are better is because that is yum
Another reason is are better is because sushi has more taste than pies
Kia ora my name is Kasey-rae and I agree with your comment because sushi is way better than pies because there is so many different
Deletetypes of sushi
Hi MizzD my name is Eden. I agree that sushi is better then pies. I would say sushi is also more health. There's more flavours and more food to try. You can have to the choice to have meat or no meat. There's soups and chicken you can have instead. This is my reason why sushi is better then pies.
Deletei agree that pie is more better than sushi because it hot and yummy
ReplyDeletei disagree sushi is better
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Azanna I don't know what Sushi taste like so I might go with pies also I will agree with Sophie beacause my main reason is beacause i Love all the flavors.
ReplyDeleteHi, my name is Hunter.
ReplyDeleteI think pies is are better than sushi.
One reason pies are better is because pies are hot
pies are better
ReplyDeletehi my name is tevita
ReplyDeletei think pies are better than sushi
one reason pies are better than sushi because its much tasty than sushi
pies are better than sushi because the covering
ReplyDeleteis covered with seaweed and they put wasabi in it
that is my opinion
hi i'm Souta I think sushi is more important than pie
ReplyDeleteMy main reason is sushi is more healthy then pie because it Has cucumbers,salmon and pies has lots of mince and cheese.
Hi, my name is Hunter.
ReplyDeleteI think sushi is are better than pies.
One reason sushi are better is because sushi has energy and healthy and good for you when you are hungry
hi my name is Dakota i thaik that rugby is better because you can try in
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i think pie is better because it has more tast and its more relaxing
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